I think that more effort could have been done to this. I just think it looks like it was done by like a 10 Year Old. It looks like it was only made in like a couple hours. It needs tons of improvement on everything of it. The audio scared the crap out of me at the end. I suggest doing something more then this and adding more effort into Animations. I'm just being honest to help you and not to hurt your feelers. Criticism
Is apart of everything and without it we cannot learn more and grow. Good luck on future work.
keep in mind ive only been working with the program for a month now. im working on a yo gabba gabba parody at the moment. give it a watch when its uploaded. i think youll see quite an improvement over this video. kthxbai ^^
I thought it gave some good information. It was to the point. Just the voice was kind of Demonic. I don't like how the end of the video loops. Overall I thought It was good. Maybe could have been a little longer. Keep doing what you do. Good luck.
Could have been longer.
I really thought It could have been longer and with more details about Neanderthals and I just wanted more information then just talking about what they ate and then it ends. I just think that this would have been good with more information behind it and graphical animations to show which could have made this more interesting. I also hate that it loops. Keep going with Animations and get better.
Thought of something
I really hate loops. Its more like wasting someone's time. I was really expecting to see something nice from this but Nope =( . I also don't like Rap. It would have been cool to see something going on with the song and the animation. I really thought there would be more then just this =p
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Not Sure what to say.
I do not like the background music for some reason it feels like it just keeps going and it feels boring a bit and loopy. I think the drawing was OK maybe could have been done a bit better. Maybe some voice sometimes and different sounds then maybe a mouse clicking sound for walking. It just needs a lot of improvement in my opinion. Keep doing what you do and learning more and more and you will get better over time. Good luck!
Im giving a 5 because of No Sound. Try adding some sound =)
Also Good job on this. It looked smooth throughout. The animation could have been a bit longer. Keep Going and Good Luck.
It hasn't been finished yet when i finish it there will be sound
I really hate to see Text To Speech programs be used in Animations. I like voice better then hearing some Robot speak to me. Get some friends next time and buy a good Microphone so that you can add voice. I gave you 2 stars because of the drawing effort but its the TTS that drags me off.
Very Short, Could have done better.
Im Sorry, but you could have done a lot better with this. Maybe making it longer then about a second and so that sound has something to follow with on the stage instead of it ending so fast and sound keeps going.
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